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Eng201 2nd Assignment idea solution nov 2012
How to Write Letter of Inquiry?
A letter of inquiry is written to inquire about an issue from a higher authority.
The letter is drafted to get some more information which is not available on website, brochures,
literature of the product. The letter is written by a customer to the company seeking some information about a
new product or service. This sort of letter is written by a student to university to get information about a recently launched course. This type of letter is written to governmental officials to understand how to complete a procedure or apply for a license, etc.
To seek information that can be used is the main objective of this letter. The letter is specially written to enquire about a product, service, course, government rules, etc. from authorities.
The letter has to use formal language with soft and positive tone. The letter has to be to the
point, short and precise. The letter should give out the main purpose in the first few lines so
that the reader can clearly understand the motive. The letter has to clearly state the issue and aspect of the issue you want to inquire about. Be clear in what you are inquiring about and how the authority can help you in that regard.
Letters of Inquiry
A letter of inquiry asks someone for specific information.
In some cases, such as a request for promotional material,
the recipient will have a clear interest in responding to your letter.
In other cases, such as a request for specific information on a
product, the recipient may or may not be as motivated to respond
quickly. Consequently, always make the tone of the letter friendly
and make it easy for the recipient to identify and provide the
information you need.
Format of a Letter of Inquiry
Follow this format in writing a letter of inquiry:
1:-In the first paragraph, identify yourself and, if appropriate, your position, and your institution or firm.
2:-In the second paragraph, briefly explain why you are writing and how you will use the requested information.
Offer to keep the response confidential if such an offer seems reasonable.
3:-List the specific information you need.
You can phrase your requests as questions or as a list of specific items of information.
In either case, make each item clear and discrete.
4:-Conclude your letter by offering your reader some incentive for responding.
A inquiry letter format is as follows:
The first paragragh should identify yourself
and your firm or instituition.
The second paragraph should briefly explain
why you are writing and how the information will be used.
Third, list the specific information you are needing
and fourth end your letter by offering your
reader some incentive for their respond.
Just remember to keep the letter friendly..
Why do we write a letter of enquiry?
You probably found the answers to some of your questions, but not to all of them. So, how can you find out the information you need? The answer is simple. Write a letter (or email) of enquiry!
What are the sections of a letter of enquiry?
A letter of enquiry typically has the following sections. Put them in the correct order.
a. Reason for writing
b. Closing: request for a quick answer
c. Questions asking for specific information
d. Opening greeting
e. Date
f. Request for extra information
g. Addresses
h. Closing: greeting and signature
Now look at the following example letter and check.
46/9 Nguyen Trai StreetDistrict 5Ho Chi Minh CityVietnam
Camford Language School
34 Downs Street
Wrexbury
Devon
EX45 7AZ
United Kingdom
14 April 2011
Dear Ms Smith
I am writing to enquire about your summer courses which I saw advertised in ‘English Today’.
I recently took the FCE exam and I am now studying for CAE. Please could you tell me if you have advanced courses available? What dates do the courses start and how much is the cost? I will be coming from Vietnam. I would like to know what kind of visa I should apply for. I would also like to know more about the accommodation. Are single rooms available? Are meals included in the cost of a course? I would be grateful if you could send me more information about your school and the surrounding area.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Kiet Nguyen
Answer:
1. Addresses
2. Date
3. Opening greeting
4. Reason for writing
5. Questions asking for specific information
6. Request for extra information
7. Closing: request for a quick answer
8. Closing: greeting and signature
How do we ask questions and make requests in a letter of enquiry?
In a formal letter of enquiry we often use polite forms to ask questions. Compare the question forms below:
Direct (neutral) form | Indirect (formal) form |
Do you have advanced courses available? | Please could you tell me if you have advanced courses available? |
What dates do the courses start? | I would be grateful if you could let me know what dates the courses start. |
What kind of visa should I apply for? | I would like to know what kind of visa I should apply for. |
Please send me more information. | I would be grateful if you could send me more information. |
Look at the example letter again. Notice that we usually use a mix of indirect and direct forms. This produces a polite, yet clear letter. If we used indirect forms for all the letter, it would sound ‘wordy’ and lose clarity.
Which indirect questions need a question mark?
Look at the example questions and requests in the table above. Which ones have a question mark? Why? Now check your ideas below.
Explanation: Indirect questions and requests have two parts. The first part is a polite expression, such as ‘I would be grateful if’. The second part is the question or request.
To choose the correct punctuation, look at the grammar of the first part. If it is grammatically a question, use a question mark e.g. Could you tell me…?
If it is grammatically a statement, use a full stop e.g.I would like to know… .
How can I practice writing indirect questions and requests?
Write the following questions and requests in an indirect (polite and formal) way.
1. Do you provide special training for goalkeepers?
2. I’m 19 years old. Can I take part in the football camp?
3. Do you have any camps for girls?
4. Send me a brochure.
5. My son doesn’t speak any English. Do you have any courses for beginners?
6. Will you pick my daughter up from the airport?
7. I’m vegetarian. Do you provide vegetarian meals?
8. Tell me the arrangements for health insurance.
9. Will I meet any famous players?
Answers:
Note: there are many possible answers. The following are just examples. Note the punctuation
1. Please could you tell me if you provide special training for goalkeepers?
2. I am 19 years old. I would like to know if I can take part in the football camp.
3. Please could you let me know if you have any camps for girls?
4. I would be grateful if you could send me a brochure.
5. My son does not speak any English. Please could you tell me if you have any courses for beginners?
6. I would like to know if you would be able to pick my daughter up from the airport.
7. I’m vegetarian. Please could you tell me if you provide vegetarian meals?
8. I would be grateful if you could tell me the arrangements for health insurance.
9. Please could you tell me if I will meet any famous players?
How can I practice writing a letter of enquiry?
Look at the advertisement for the soccer school and your questions again. Write a letter to ask for information. Use your questions, or the questions from the exercise above.